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I like the idea behind the photo, but it is a bit distracting. If you take a step back and review the image, notice how your eye is not sure where to go. Even tho you put in a small depth of field blur to the background, my focal point is tending towards those chairs. I think next time try another angle, and maybe a tighter shot of the bride and groom figures. Also try and adjust your lighting to make that image really pop off the page. It is a little to soft which can make the image dull in appearance.

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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
1/6 second
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52 mm
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May 9, 2009, 9:40:53 AM

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